Wednesday, July 7, 2010

All my Poems

i have a problem..... i cant stop writing poems!!!!
like i wrote one about the storm outside the other day.
and here is one of my favorites i have written.....

VIRGINA
The beautiful cities.
The busy cities.
The sites to see.
The place I live.
The place I have loved.
The state with the Nations Capital.
Home of the Presidents.
I will never forget Virgina,
My home.

so please comment on what you like about my poem, and comment on what you think i should work on. thanks!



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